All Comments on 'A Favour for a Friend'

... the plot is not new; it appears in Literotica stories once evey couple of months. This time, however, the author kept it believable, and his pacing was very good.

As to believability - well, it could have happened and probably does, although the woman may not be so straightforward about it. I wish all stories on this list showed the same effort by the author to keep from going completely over the top

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I know it's a previously-done idea, but I wanted to put my own story down all the same. I'm glad you were pleased with the pace, and -- if I understand you -- a footing in reality.

I'm actually glad you didn't say the hymen is a few inches inside the vagina like many of the first time writers on this site do, they have no idea of female anatomy.

Very tender and utterly believable.

Is there any possibility of a follow-on chapter with a deepening relationship between the two? Even though the topic has been covered before, I really liked your version.

great story but needs a follow up with more deepening relationship

i think it is capable of continuing.

I love this story. It's hard to tread the line between eroticism, compassion, understanding, and believability. You did it all very well. Others say this is an oft repeated theme? Funny thing but this is the first story I've read about a partner of either sex having a physical disability and I've been reading Literotica stories for a very long time and contributed a few of my own.

I know, not every rainbow leads to a pot of gold but it would be nice to see the relationship between the people in this story develop into something more. This could be done by editing and extending this story, or by writing a sequel.

Great story passionate and romantic, two great friends.

where was she when I was single

You stated that this was thie first story you read where one of the characters had a physical disability since you started reading Literotica. You might want to check out "My Sister's Friends" by Callicious (four chapters).

It is "sweet" a very overused word. Nobody is taking advantage of anybody else. and both come out way ahead of where they were with the interaction together.

Now why can't all men be like that???

I am perplexed at all the glowing responses. This is a 3 star effort at best. Obviously, folks have not ready many other excellent works. They hump all weekend and then what? Are they still friends? Are they still lovers? Not much transpired or was answered here.

I liked the story but u hope younwillnwrite.more.