All Comments on 'Click Ch. 04'

Five stars again. Keep up the excellent work! Thank you.

Ditto...I agree with the prior comment...waiting for the next one!!!

Hey, remember the first chapter of this series? Where it was about a guy using a mind-control camera to have sex with his mother and daughter? Yeah, what the hell happened to that story? I don't even recognize this chapter.

Very good keep them coming

Good story man, can't wait to see what happens next.

Great series mate! Please keep the chapters coming! It'd be nice to learn more of what the hell happened with Brenda too

yeah,

But it totally fits with most of his other works

Lost Boy

P_L_E_A_S_E

Get an editor

I definitely cannot stress to you just how much I was not expecting Brenda to be an assassin. I literally sat there for about 3 to 5 minutes reading and rereading that part. Great story! Love it!

Really great story, but Jesus it's going fast and weird. I like it, but it's been getting crazier and crazier since uncle carl

Not quite sure where your narrative is going but your sex scenes are good enough I don't care.

More turns than a circular race track, but still reading.

Okay are these the same person cause I'm confused. I liked Brandy.

This story went from decent to weird in like 2 seconds.firwt he was an aliens offspring and half human now some how Norse mythology is mixed in and so is area 51 and Egyptian mythology and technomancy and and and......oh and the fairy realms are apparently sending assassins after a high school nobody.what the fuck?

good, but if his mom the person her raised him had her tubes ties like she told him when he fuck her for the first time how is going to have his kid.

Very good can't put it down, just the wrong category.

Maybe the first chapter

You ask how mum gets with child .... magic mate !!

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

Gets better and better. I love weird and this is it in spades. Great work!!!!!

This is insane. I imagine this is what it's like to visit Wonderland while on acid.

this is unbelievable. Should be in the sy-fy section.

Luv it. Caught the Dresden Files reference, at least I think it was, plus a couple of other series. I am a Jim Butcher fan, anyway. Great story and hot sex, too.

This story makes no sence and is all over the place. Slow down and actually right a coherent thought.

this had me so fucking confused. like we take such a hard left turn with absolutely no context or setup. this chapter should have been like 10-15 pages with pacing. it took me out of the story so much it was unreal. probably the worst chapter of the series up till this point.

Confusion Reigns...yes it does!! I agree with others here...

Yet...I Love It!!!!! This is SSSOOO strange, yet so familiar, somehow!! I am going to read this to the end!!! Yes, I am!!

Five**5**Stars...would award more for this if I could!!!!!

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