by GPLockwood
I loved reading this, I checked the site everyday in case of new chapter and u did not disappoint, Plz do the next chapter soon, can't wait to read more.
This is very good. Right there at the top. Quality writing and an entertaining story along with the erotica.
This is simply amazing! Incredible style, great detail, awesome set up. I love it :)))
Threesome with Athena and Aphrodite would be the only way to make this story any better than it already is!!!!!!!!!
I made a mistake in the star rating. I pushed three, when it's an absolute five. This story has ancient gods and magic. Sexual testosterone and heroics. I freaking loved it!!!! I felt that I was in the story itself, you know... Connected to it somehow. Great job writing an awesome story, that could actually be true. Thank you very much.
Denord
Well, now. What started as a particularly naughty story is turning into a proper epic. I half expect John to ascend to diety-hood at the end, or at least demigod status; What he did is the stuff legendary heroes were capable of.
Granted, the methods are a bit unorthodox, but what the hell.
Can't wait for the next chapter! I like your threesomes the most!
Awesome story... Can't wait for the next chaper. I actually sat down n read what you have up so far in one pass. It is an amazon story that grips you.
I'm so glad I took the time to read this story. Rarely does one run into adult writing that can engage the intellect as well as the libido. You have a very interesting plot going on, and I would be extremely disappointed if you didn't continue what, for myself and everyone who reads this, can agree is a very rewarding and interesting trip.
Thank you so much for a great read.
ultimate.. ultimate... ultimate.... sir, I am desperately. waiting. for the next. part...it has been. long time...please. post soon...waiting....
Truly amazing. You have rocked me to my core. Wonderful read. Though I was rather saddened by the threats. I hope no one gets raped, especially Enyo.
Very enjoyable read and fantastic writing. My only complaint is that you consistently misspell lose as loose.
Hey there,
I just finished this chapter, and have been binge reading for the past couple days. I wanted to say that this series is, to me, amazing. The characters have some depth to them, the premise is fresh, and the execution leaves little to be desired. I'm greatly looking forward to the next installment in the series, and until then, thank you for what you've given us so far.
--LE
Don't leave us hanging! Finish the chapter already. It's been almost a year already.
It's very good, but it gets so frustrating when series are orphaned. Please don't do that.
I have managed to complete this series over a long weekend. Your combining of Christian, Pagan and sexuality is a true tour de force!
It is very hard to find writers as good as you are. this story has kept me wrapped up every time a new part shows.
Loving all the interwoven threads in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
You can't tell me that is the end!! No, no, no, no, that's simply not true. It can't be true. Can it? Please, oh magnificent author, please continue this story to its conclusion. Thank you!
JJ
I only just found this series, please don't stop working on it! It's amazing!
You are as masterful as lost boy on here and as a Sailor who dwelt in the sand and loves my cousin, and owns more books than my wife can comprhend you are a wonderful writer and spinner of tales!
I agree, please don't stop working on it. As a true believer in the continuous, but perhaps with lesser influence, existence of old gods and energetic gestalts, I really like the story. Thanks for your work.
I mean such a well developed story that seems to stop halfway through, I doubt it will ever be finished as he stopped at this one 4 yrs ago :/
GPLockwood with us, folks! I've been checking every month and never lost hope.
This is one of the best stories I've ever heard and loved every chapter ! I can't believe its been years since the last release. If the author ever comes back I hope he can finish this!
One of the best stories I've read in over a year on this site. Please post more!
Stories this long usually lose me very early on, but this one was good enough to keep me reading all the way through. I was impressed that the abundance of sex didn't overwhelm the story itself. If it had I would never have never made it past chapter one. The end was fitting and any attempt to carry it on from there would have been superfluous and boring. Overall, a good read.
I thoroughly enjoy intricately entertwrined stories with multiple subplots. I would have liked to see a chapter 9 involving john and his mother. Because this story was written approximately 13 years ago, Iknow it willnot happen but I can hope.