All Comments on 'A Demon's Embrace Ch. 02'

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SweetGaspsSweetGaspsabout 10 years ago
Proof read is needed

But other than that I enjoy this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
different section

Love the story but think this should be in the non-human section but that is just my opinion

missymoemissymoeabout 10 years ago
I like the story line

Unfortunately I cannot rate this story higher without major revisions being done to correct the misused words, grammar mistakes, and fragmented sentences. It is an enjoyable story so far, just rather difficult to read without editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Still reading...

Despite the wide variety of mistakes

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