All Comments on 'Summer's Blackmail Ch. 18'

Legendary. I can't wait for summer to come back to school.

Legendary. I can't wait for summer to come back to school and be blackmailed and humiliated their.

epic tale of submission and I totally enjoyed all of it

Keep up the good work !I l like it a lot and look forward to more. I think your writing is excellent! Your flow is good and it carries from paragraph to paragraph. I personally have a hard time writing this paragraph after a stroke. and I was a teacher.

I like to read forced tattooing, piercing and sexual servitude which is non- consensual.

Ed

Terrific part 18. This is amazing. Great creativity. What will happen next? Will her hubby find out before she looses her job and is a total slut ?

This chapter is much more imaginative and action than the last one. One thing that is repetitive is your continuous description of her six inch slut heels, dress, bra, slave collar, etc. Describing them many times throughout your chapter isn't necessary and it slows down your narrative flow. An occasional mention of her attire will help keep the reader in the flow but you're overdoing since almost the start of your story.

Reading your story, I was curious why you didn't have Summer get her pussy and ass waxed rather than shaving. Doing this might help speed up your story but it just might be a reflection of your personal preferences. As for her future piercings, another surprising omission is her belly button not being pierced. Since that's almost common with today's youths, I'm surprised that Todd didn't consider having Marcos doing in ch 5.

Lastly, it's getting harder for me to accept that no one's going to talk about Summer's change from a conservative woman who's dressed professionally for work to a slut dressed for sex. The high school rumor mill should be in overtime by now with the abrupt changes in Summer's personality and clothes.

Not my favorite chapter, but as always, rather well written. The best chapters focus on Todd and Summer. As for lacking reality, who cares? These stories are not meant to be realistic, just fantasies to excite the writer and readers.

Have her wear daisy dukes shorts since you like denim on her. Have you consider corsets, teddies, and leather/pvc/latex wear for her as well?

she has the rings in her lips but you haven't used them for anything how locking her up with them or using them to hold up her stockings with etc.

How dare you berate women in this manner you little piece of shit. Who do you think you are? You paint women with a very large brush. You act as though we're all whores just waiting to submit to you. I'll have you know that I'm a successful lawyer and I'm quite sure that I could beat you at a verbal challenge any day of the week. I would love to have the opportunity to spar with you. I'll also have you know that I'm an attractive woman, age 39, independent, confident and sexy as hell. For you to think that I would want to submit to you makes me very angry. If I did consider submitting to you, even on a lark, I'm sure you couldn't handle me. Go ahead and try. Sure, I'll submit to you. I'll be your little bitch. You can order me around and tell me what to do. Do you want me to strip off my clothes. Fine. I'll do it. Do you want to write on me with magic marker. Fine. I'll do that too. I'll do whatever you tell me to. I would love to be your little slut. I want it so bad. I want to be your slut. Please, sir, let me serve you. Let me be your slut. I will worship you. I want you as my master. Your writing is incredible. It really turns me on. I find myself thinking about it in bed, at work, everywhere. You haven't written another chapter in so long. I need more. I need more of your story. I need more of you. I want to be your obedient slave. Hell, I don't know what I want. I must sound like a crazy person. Am I a confident woman or a horny slut who just wants a hard fucking? Maybe both? I am horny. Yes, I'm a horny slut. Yes, i want you to fuck me. But i want so much more. I need so much more. Please show mercy on me. Please write to me. Your slut. Becky

Hi lawyer slut becky,

If you truly want to be my slut, then go to my profile and send me an email from there at this site. You can write directly to me giving me your contact information. Otherwise, you are just trying to pull everyone's chains on the published comments section.

Master J

After Reading The Story I Think BeckyS Comments Were More Interesting But I Agree She Is More talk Looking For Attention Than Actions....Big Difference Between Talk And Actually Doing...But Entertaining None The less

After reading Becky's comments about how much a slut she wants to be for Master J, all women should serve men with their bodies as I do to my Master

You continue to impress with Summer being dominated. Any chance of Lisa or the Wilson's making an appearance at Summer's place to humiliate/dominate her during after the weekend?& I hope you post soon........

Awesome chapter @ 5* :-)

Now that's Todd is in her inner sanctum, he should fuck her on her own bed forcing her to realize that her marriage bed is no longer exclusive to her husband James. This will excite her as well as reinforcing Todd training of her becoming his slut.

This is a story of exceptional quality.

I like our tentative progress towards more piercings and maybe a irreversible tattooed surgically enhanced future.The long expected guest waits in our longing. A career(?) changing opportunity to take the encounter between summer and her husband to a seldom height((re)-read)

Simplysizzling Trainig Rebecca ch.12 or more...) Shine and fly!

is the next installment coming anytime soon ....

I am enjoying this story but it is giving my Mistress so many ideas. Please more Melanie , her mom and Summer

Please please please let Todd dominate Summer more in her own home. Hopefully we can see her being dominated and more importantly, humiliated in the near future when her children are around to visit - Sort of like a secret humiliation by Todd. Love to see more toys bought in to humiliate Summer in public too, especially at school.

Please update soon

Great story so far

it is original, exciting, and fully absorbing. It's far too late to stop writing with to much unanswered. Yes, we all understand writers block and the fact that you have already written 18 incredible chapters but you led us here and we are expecting you to complete this loving task.

I, personally, and truly absorbed in how and when she will return to her husband. Know you are full of surprises.............

A truly fantastic story, I sincerely hope that you continue, particularly in the direction that you are currently headed with summer. Things seem to be shaping up nicely for her.

you and your story suck ,you are a sick scum bag for the things you wrote about summer doing just wrong to have a person doing those things I hope her husband comes home and kills all you scum bags and her for doing those things, again fuck you and all your sick dush bag friends...............

Is a story fantasy,I for one love the way it was written. some time i fantasized being Summer and wonder how does it feel to be controlled. If you don't like the story, STOP READING IT. No one is forcing you to read it.

RW

Thanks so much Rebecca. Everyone, I am writing a fantasy series and trying to keep in interesting. I have had a brain block for a bit, but I am almost done with Chapter 19. I appreciate everyone who reads the stories as well as taking the time to write comments. But, please be respectful........if my stories are not your cup of tea, then please move on to one that works for you. MJ

What a great story. Especially love hearing of the disgusting items that have gone into all her holes. She needs to have more items...dp's, she needs to be full. Keep up the excellent writing!

I would love to see Todd end up keeping her. Can't wait to see what piercings and Tattoos she is given. I also hope she ends up having to do her sons without them knowing who she is. It might be fun to see her given an impossible choice like drinking piss or getting a very visible tattoo. She chooses one and is forced to do the other anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey Wilcox010 this is an amazing story and I have really enjoyed reading it and look forward to chapter 19 and beyond. How many more chapters are you planning to write and can you confirm a date when Chapter 19 will be released?

I agree with some of the posts it would be fun to see Melanie Hart more involved and it seems your moving in that direction which is awesome. It will also be cool to play the sons angle as to they seriously suspect something or are sent anonymous emails with pictures or videos of Summer however the face is not recognized and they find the slut appealing or attractive because of how dirty a slut she is. I have never posted before so hopefully the feedback is welcomed. Can't wait to read Chapter 19.

Hi, I have posted Chapter 19. It is quite long so I apologize for that. I had to set up a couple of other types of scenarios that I may play out! Enjoy and keep those comments coming.

MJ

Thanks MJ when did you post it as I can't find it listed or do they have to review it first? Sorry for being so curious it's just a great story I love the professional personality vs her slut one and her doing everything to protect her professional position

this is a great story. hope to see lisa become a slut soon also. it would also be fantastic to see the bitch sandra wilson drawn into becoming a slut also by melanie,harding,or todd to get her off hardings back or melanie to have fun with. bob

You need to advise all readers that in real life they should NEVER NEVER NEVER insert any kind of bottle into a woman's vagina or in anyone's rectum. As a medical professional I want everyone to know that it can creat enough suction that you can not remove it. This has happened many many times. People wind up in the emergency room to get help. Not only can this cause serious problems but is also embarrassing for the unfortunate recipient.

Thank you for the medical warning. I am hopeful that all of my readers understand we are talking fantasy, not reality. But, just the same thanks for the reminder.

MJ

I especially loved the scene with "the poor teacher" being used on the "contraption" in the basement! My one suggestion is that some of the descriptions of Summer getting dressed get a little long and tedious. More sex, less scene-setting! But that's a minor complaint -- love the story!

Hawttt

Same story, some character shifts. you mention briefly the feeling of a sub<>dom shift.

Perhaps you could introduce some justice by getting these mentally juvenile males into cages with the women as doms when the husband comes home with a trend towards a mixed gender zoo run by people who can control themselves and make money.

It's really difficult to read because the writing is so stiff.