All Comments on 'A Long Time Ago...'

But I must confess,if I were your protagonist, I would never even consider having a real relationship with this gal. The term you used, 'LBFM', was the correct one. Yeah, people change, and we all make foolish choices when we are young. (BTW, I liked your discussion on how we all make choices and mistakes.)

But since she already knows that he is in the top tax rate bracket income, you could never trust her motives. Plus, who would want a wife who will have sex with anyone who owns a hot car?

Keep her as a fuck buddy, and string her along... but don't let her get her claws into you! LMFAO! Even better — offer to pay her as an escort to keep it clean and impersonal. And if you hurt her feelings, well, tough!

But was a little disappointed in the ending - thought he may be wiser with age.

Still I do enjoy your writing - please continue to entertain us.

I enjoyed the story up till the end. She left the reunion with him because he had saved her from a bunch of crude loud mouths. Would she have been so willing to bed him if he was still driving a Honda Accord and making an average salary? She seemed rather shallow to me! I find it hard to believe that someone who has been as successful as he in business would still be interested in pursuing the "lady" with a long term relationship in mind.

As for the attacks on her at the reunion, the actions by her tormentors were those of 18 year olds. These men were in their late 40s or early 50s and would presumably have mellowed a little by then. If they chose to belittle her, I suspect they would have been more subtle.

He still has the mindset of a school kid. Both of them to need to examine themselves and grow up.

I like a fast car just as much as Lori does but they sure don't have me addicted like a drug addict. What if some other guy comes along with a better hot rod, is she going to jump into his car and screw him too?

The protagonist crashed his Aston Martin on the drive over and all of this happened in the embers of his dying mind, a la jacob's ladder.

Enjoyed this one also. Glad the men in the stories love tits, boobs, big boobs. Your detail on what to do with them is marvelous. Going back to read more.

mentioned at the beginning were left out altogether from then on. For the Reunion, too many things just magically appeared, with no preparation. I do like your stories about people, and their feelings, hopes and dreams, usually. This story omitted too many of your 'normal' considerations.

I still liked it, just wanted your usual quality !!!

While I must point out that this story is one of my earliest efforts, I do appreciate your comments about my 'usual quality', as I have learned so much over the last fifteen months. Thank you for holding me to a higher standard, and I will try to keep up the good work. Perhaps a rewrite of this story would be justified?

You are doing it right. I just panned a couple of authors earlier because they were juvenile. You are doing yoeman work her bud and the result is truly enjoyable. Tnx, Lynn

Perhaps a little brief in parts, characters slightly unclear, but a nice story

Thanks

HP

The story unraveled very well. You have a knack for good story telling. Please give us some more.

Another great story, but it's pedal, not peddle.

the characters have so much more to experience yet surely

I just want to say how funny it is to read some of these pretentious comments. As if these cum-splattered people really were looking for - je ne se quois?

It was fun to see a reunion as a caricature. Each social group on display. The knuckle draggers even sleazier, gossipers doing their worst, etc. Instead of a Detroit muscle car an Aston. Loved the word play, pushing her buttons? Not just successful but Uber rich,

Thanks for the humour.

The story is well written, but I had a hard time liking it. Both protagonists seemed shallow. He seem to have gone to the reunion just into her pants. She still seems to be the same girl who sluts herself for any guy with fast car. It's weird the story category is 'mature', since they acted anything but mature. (rant off)

You know, from her muscle car husband...?

But hey, she's sorry she WAS so shallow... and now though she'll cum three times just from being in the CAR at least he can count on the fact she's someone he'd want to have a serious relationship with... as long as he can keep her away from OTHER muscle car owner's... unless he doesn't mind sharing...

She might have grown up enough to know she should feel bad for treating him like she did but not enough to be trusted anywhere a car might be...

I thought it was incredibly hot, yet plausible. i actually did have a reunion with an old crush, but only for a weekend.

What a darling story of a teenage, now grown up reunion!!! Well written and formed, I enjoyed it very much. It's too bad some readers can't separate reality from FICTION, I'm sure they would find reading much more fun! 5stars for this wonderful short story ~ thank you!

You write very well and have been one of my favorites for quite some time. This one is not only well written but gave me happy eyes. More please.

Hot sex and a good storyline. Thanks for sharing.

sure these are fiction , but sometimes they border on what happens in real life .not this 1 but several stories border on what has happen in my life

A quick 3 pages with some good sex but characters a little weak and could have been better written to create a more realistic scenario after all its 25 years or more ago and some are still acting as though still at school.

veritable cum factory indeed...!

tho have to second comment they both seem shallow

a dumb slut and a new jerk???

Should have fucked her and then thrown her out ,as she did to him,after all Joey was right she is a slut.

now the next time,,,what will it be like, TK U MLJ LV NV

I never knew, money will buy you TRUE LOVE!

Surely there is a sequel? Please😑

Give me a break! She was shallow in HS and still is.

hmmm...

What shallow tosh.

She was way too shallow and the car getting her off showed she still was. Enjoy the fuck out of her but drive home with just a memory.

I wouldn’t give up shit to be with her and her heartbreak

Bill S.

Great second chances story, the storyline would have been a lot better if the story continued with them riding off into the sunset together for their happily ever after. 5/5

The next car with more horsepower shows up and she is GONE

this tripe is not worth the words

The anony's are upset

You are doing it right

Is she the only woman in the world. What a pea brain of a man.