All Comments on 'Sis Piss Ch. 05'

I'm a little pissed. This story sucked

Loved the story great just like the others. Can't wait till Tom and marion have more alone time. Keep up the good work .

opus magna!

Congrats....amazing ...erotic...lewd...hot...

You should do one about drinking period blood

I'm enjoying this series, hope the next one is along soon!

WOW, amazing story! I quite enjoyed it!

waiting for next part i like pisstress lessly so much thanks

I am so envious of Pisspot, for his amazing luck at having three mistresses and his ability to ejaculate purely through doing it. Very hot. I would love to read if someday he had nieces that made use of his special talents as well.

great story

you should increase the humiliation level by lez as she made him lick her asshole

he should be licking all three assholes and give a new experience to sister

and he should be eating some of lez shit as surprise

anyways great story and looking for many upcoming parts

your writing is good

waiting for new parts to come

level of humiliation should be increased and girls should use him as their full toilet and for every work

You should add little feet domination as well like the girls make him lick their piss soaked feet and les making him her foot stool

Great story, hope you continue it.

One of the best i evere read. Thanks a lot. Write mqre please/

Very much enjoyed the first five chapters. Hope that we have some fucking between the sisters soon. As an extra twist would be great if one of them started their period for Tom to clean up!

Exellent story " the concept of period licking is very good and he can suck their tampons and period blood and all other stuff and lick their piss soacked foot and waiting for the next chapter

It's daringly sick and twisted... But absolutely brilliant. Could not put it down. Good work!

I so hope you're going to continue. You've already spoken of the club, teased us with sex. Come on!!!

When is there going to be a part 6

I'm really really hoping for a part 6 and beyond!!!

REALLY hoping for chapter 6 and beyond!!

I am enjoying this story so much. I want to know what happens next. What happens at the club?

Will there be a part 6 because this was the best story ever and I want to know what happens next.

I only wish there were lots, lots, LOTS more of these.

These are the best goldenshower stories I have ever read.

amazing story please continue with chapter 6 and more

Will we be getting chapter 6 ?

I do hope so !

bravo carrey on next part

e ail sanjay2008_99@rediffmail.com

I agree with the other commenters here - wonderfully written, deliciously hot, please give us more!

So,you've had a lot of positive comments,and high ratings,SO,where are chapters 6,7,etc.?!

We still need to see Tommy realize that in order to have a law career he needs to piss all over Leslee and start pissing on his clients.

We also need to see Tommy and Marion cum together for some hot sucking and fucking!

2014 was the last entry? Cum on,let it flow once again. (We miss the Sis piss!)

Hot story! And very well written. What happens next?!

Please continue this series I loved every minute of reading it

This narrative is so well written that it is hard to accept that the writer has not had first hand experience of an incestual relationship or have they!

It has an erotic depth that courses deep sexual arousal and feelings.

Being allowed the privilege of watching a lady pee is something that I will never forget and is a thrilling experience, but since my wife died last year I don't think that joy will ever be repeated as I don't know of any other lady who would allow me to share in that most intimate moment again.

Please keep on writing this story as it gives both mental and physical relief when you haven't got a partner and this story allows your imagination to flow freely, no pun intended.

Just reading this makes me thirsty for a Lady or several house me as their P.P.

Hello, RabbitPrince.

I just finished ch. 05. of, “Sis Piss.” Shit-grin, comatose state of overwhelming joy! Or, in other words, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. The truly loving sadistic relationship between Leslee and Tom worms my heart and tickles my soul. It is rare, to capture the nuances of a loving sadistic, masochistic relationship and you have done that nicely, for me! The heat you have generated between Marion and Tom is killing me softly!

I see you have written this story over several years and I can’t wait for the next chapter. I understand and appreciate the effort involved in writing a story. I just lost 10 months of my life, to my last endeavor, and I am just now catching up on some reading. When I got to the end of ch. 05, I was heartbroken to be left hanging, “thirsty” for more! I will try to wait patiently for the next, hot mouth full of joy, dispensed with love!

Again, thank you for your efforts. Sincerely, Hubby77.

...of the quality of your writing, the depth and sensitivity of your understanding of the issues and the huge effort that you have put into this work. It is not only a a pleasure to read as a work of erotica, but also as a well-constructed story with a really nice vocabulary. Head and shoulders above most. Thankyou.

I’ll fill in for Tom with his sisters when he out of town or on vacation.

I was looking forward to the internal dialogue of them all when being watched by a group of strangers getting off on their predilections. Should I beg?

I’d like to see him fuck at least one or all of his sisters. Maybe even pissing in their cunts? That would be way hot. Your the boss. I’ll like however you choose to rap it up.

Fucking awesome hot Story.

When we can read the Karaoke Episode ?

PLEASE write and Post it

This has been such a nice series keep going please! Wish it was me drinking all this pee, I would even drink Tom's pee, and would love to swallow his cum anytime. da.cd@frontier.com

Poor Tom, he is always so obliging to his 3 sisters, but when is the poor bastard going to get a proper fuck, I hope it is in chapter 6!

What a Fantastic story!!!!! Please don't let this story die!!!!! Please give us the next chapter. Thanks!!!!!!!

Please post another!!!

I read the first chapter years ago and loved it, checked recently and read the rest. It makes me hard reading it and I wish I was in Tom's shoes. Looking forward to the next 20 chapters ☺

Such a priviledge to have three girls to fill your mouth with golden nectar it looks like one is needing to be fucked and it will be a honour to make love to her and hopefully his seed will impregnate her then in turn the other two so that the three of them have the same due date and concieve the babies together this is becoming a true gift and not only will the drinking of their golden nectar continue but a prize of then being breast fed by the three of them will be rewarding

Encore!!!!!!! How long till chapter 6???????

I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chapter, but how I would have loved to have had three sisters like that

Please continue, this amazing story is a very exciting tale. I'm reminded of drinking my gorgeous wife's pee and loving her for blessing me. I would be so aroused all day knowing it was coursing through my entire body, nourishing my lust n submission, and when I finally had to pee, believe me I wanted to hold it in forever, knowing it came from her, purifying me, I had to immediately stop and jerk off