All Comments on 'Conflicted Ch. 01'

Please more!!! Can't wait to see how far mom goes to get what she wants and how far her teenage lover pushes her

her behaviour is highly unrealistic.

My point of view: The story is fun. Realism is not the point.

Not fucking likely, some mother she is, fucking her sons bully. 1* garbage!!

yep, that is how you do this.

5/5

Keep writing.

Loved it ! continue this soon

Let the bully tattoo her, share her with other bullies, take her to the prom, make his barber shave her pubes and give her a milf undercut haircut.

Go extreme it only makes these stories better like have the mother get degrading tattoos and piercings. Also have the bully show her off to people. I really liked the first one but the remake is better so far and will only get better the more extreme you go since there are to many bully/mom stories on this site already. It will make this one stand out above the rest.

I don't look over this group much (mostly LW) bu t I see I kneed to come here a lot more often, especially to catch your whole series.

5 stars on the erection scale.

I agree to make her go extreme. Not only tattoos, but piercings especially navel and pussy/clit, Cutting her hair short and dying blonde or whore-house red. Seems like she already has got the sexy clothes. Make her go to parties with him, and Stuart has arranged that her son would see her there, as his arm candy, and he is ashamed and flabergasted. Just some ideas.

he will make her pussy smooth so he can reach up and rub it, and finger fuck her. Maybe make her do a little flashing!

Fully agree go more extreme.

I really enjoyed the original story but hated the ending. Glad to see you are rewriting it.

That was great! The sex was really well done. Can't wait to read more.

Really enjoyed this, agree with other comments about extreme.

It’s certainly a sick storyline but at the same time extremely hot. I’ve certainky enjoyed to see how it’s developed.

It has been interesting to see how Leslie’s feelings for her family, especially her son Lewis have deteriorated over the course of the chapters. At this stage there is some doubt as to whether she cares and loves her son at all.

I do hope that you continue with the story until it reaches its natural conclusion. It would be interesting to see the story develop with Stuart and Leslie continuing to bully, mistreat and humiliate Lewis, with her son ultimately ending up seriously hurt and in hospital fighting for his life due to Stuart’s and Leslie’s direct actions. Something major that is potentially life threatening for Lewis. In such a plot I would like to see Leslie truly conflicted, with her feelings for Stuart having continued to develop. Would her feelings for her lover be more important to her than being at the bedside of her son who is fighting for his life? I’d hope that in the end when it came down to a life or death situation that she puts her own flesh and blood ahead of the bully.

You should be proud, this was amazing! Looking forward to more.

If Rob would have been a black guy, Sebastian would have watched his mom go black.

Holy hell. That was fucking incredible. The way the story progressed felt so natural and seamless, and the same can't be said about a lot of the stories on this site. You are so articulate. 5/5

Utter bullshit, 1/2 page was enough of this juvenile crap.

i cum so much reading this story

If Leslie is 5'9 with heels, then how tall is she without them?

Just curious, can anyone tell me what was the chapter where Leslie first called Lewis a dick head?