All Comments on 'A Demon's Child Ch. 01'

Good background. I for one will be pleased if you continue the story in your own words. Otherwise, I'd just fantasize something of my own.

Loved the virgin clarification. So fun to tell it the way you want to.

amazing beginning that leaves a lot of room To build the story. I love how Saban is slightly caring but at the same time you know just how dark he is and what he'll do to The witch once he gets his hands on her. I'm looking forward to reading More Of this story. Advice I have for you would be to keep Saban dark and slightly evil so that the readers know he is not a knight in shining armor for the witch.

This is a good story i hope you keep it going

Omg i love this series. You are a awesome writer XD i'm hoping for more chapters please and soon ^^

I am really digging these characters and there is so much more to explore with them. I do hope we get more from you. You are a fantastic writer that tantalizes me and I want more!

i do think that the word demon brings too many misconceptions so next time maybe use a different less culturally charged word

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