All Comments on 'The Halloween Party'

it's good but if she put on the panties and was not on the pill it will be very good

Why do you say that? I could probably understand your comment about Gina wearing panties creating a better story, but having Gina be on the pill is essential. Without the pill, they would have to use a condom or risk pregnancy. Fantasy sex has no condoms so the pill is the way to go. Thanks for the feedback though.

You should make a story out of this or at least think about writing fan fiction because this could be a great story. You are a really good writer .

Thank you for the feedback and strong praise.

I appreciate it.

I'm actually working on a major project right now.

In the meantime, feel free to read all of the other erotic stories that I have posted

on this site.

Feedback is always welcomed and appreciated.

Good story but he should have bitten her while fucking.

Good point, LarsM69. I should have thought of that when I first wrote and published this story over 2 years ago. Oh, well. I'll definitely take note of that if I ever write another Halloween themed story. Thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated.

Glad Vinnie got what was due him.

Loved her fucking

Nice ending