All Comments on 'A Most Unusual Romance Pt. 01'

such fond memories so well described...thanks from the bottom of our hearts

It's an involved romance with hot sex. It is not the usual story I would expect in this section, but having read it I understand why you think it should be posted here. Most importantly it is very well written

I'm looking forward to the next part.

He really got fucked by three selfish people. I wonder what Sally said in her wedding vows!

... all the random unnecessary hyphenation kept pulling me out of the story and making me just stare at the words and blink.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

Very enjoyable reading. (Every older man's dream!) I am looking forward to the continuation. Of course Clive knew what he was getting in to from his first date with Sally. So no surprise for him, though maybe some disappointment . But the hyphens, no need to hyphenate words at ends of lines, Lit. justifies automatically.

Sorry about the hyphens, I wrote these stories on a business trip on my iPad using pages and for some reason it will not wrap words. I thought I picked them all up but obviously I miss a few.

Andyhm

as entertaining as it was, the whole episode with Jane, John, and Pauline was not needed. They actually took away part of the intrigue between the core partners.

now on to part 02.

As with you other stories just great. Keep it up.

I loved the story but the blaspheming was a tad too much and unnecessary.

unusual plot , interesting & intriguing

confusing & yet still entertaining & engaging .

delightful protagonists.

xxxhugsxxx

Really enjoyed the original plot, good writing and dialogue, but the grammar and spelling could have been better.

An extraordinarily gifted writer with an excellent command of background research. 5*

I fully understand the situation. I am married to a lady ten years younger than me.A doctor decide to "tune her up" ( his own words) before she was to have open heart surgery to repair a rapid heart beat and the result was her heart was stopped for 18 minutes and I now have a wife with the emotions of an 8 year old. that was 15 years ago and in the last year I have met a lady 24 Years younger and fallen in love. It is difficult loving two people with all your heart but in different ways.

Just love a sublime and sensual romance!

Yep definitely a great read, but being picky, Knickers are not nickers and if you think a word needs a hyphen check the dictionary al-most al-ways do-esn't;)

Wel done, can't wait for the next chapter.

The robins we have had in our gardens over the years are not biscuit eaters - they eat insects and worms. Still, I suppose you could have a veggie robin!

I think you made the correct choice

It is a romantic tale, just one with multiple players

I give the story a 5 for its writing.

Yet with all the lies. ..? I would rather be single than be Clive stuck with Sally! =-)

If this author and the resulting scripts were touched by Romantic1, they By Design MUST be perfection. I follow Romantic1 to the ends of the earth, and am pleased to know he is encouraging and supporting this fine author to continue the trend. Enjoyed this segment, as a first read of this library and look forward the many happy weeks of reading. Thanks for sharing with you many fans

Tony Clarke

Key elements in an entertaining story

Regarding the ran-dom hyphons: that often happens when converting a text document from one pro-gram to another. It usually occurs at the point where there was a line break in format but not in the other. Some-times a writer will do it to make a po-int.

; D

wasn't a fan of the drama between Paulline, Jane and John. It also really annoyed me that apparently the only reason she could have a strong dislike for intimacy with a man is that she was abused and raped.

Why can't she just be someone fully gay, who don't want to share the woman she loves?

It annoyed me even more that she ended up accepting a full three-way, seems to me like she should have just accept that the relationship is doomed, her heart will be broken, but she can then try to move on.

Instead the author just wrote an unrealistic fantasy.

Debauchery, Debauchery of English Debauchery....

As an older man (divorced ) you give me hope that there might still be someone out there for me - but not sure if I could handle two ! :)

I look forward to the next chapter(s) , don't let the knockers put you off,

Oh, and call them panties; not nickers or knickers.

Chrispie, you wanker, this is an erotic site, fuck , cunt , clit , and squirting love juice

go with the slapping of flesh on flesh , erect nipples and soaked panties.

If you don't fucking like it , fuck off and read Womens Own

Fantastic story 5

I like where we've been with this story and hopefully where we are still to go.

Please ignore Crispe's complaint; all characters are different and when you see and hear them in your head, they look and act and sound a certain way. That's just who they need to be for the story, and any good writer realises this. They are in character and they stay in character. Some sound like the local vicar, and some sound like they come from the gutter, and like it or not, people blaspheme all the time, even if they go to church - because that's just how people are.

Wanting a good erotic story, but insisting they all speak as if they are freshly from the seminary isn't only unrealistic in every way, it's just silly. You can choose your own friends in real life, and if they piss you off by the way they speak, you can move them on. But when you meet characters in a story, they are not your friends, but the author's. You're a guest in their house and you don't get to make demands. If you don't like the party, then you have to move on and find a different one.

You are a good writer, so your characters can be fresh and real. Thank you for that.

we want more ;-)

Great first chapter, Andy. Randi.

Even if I take away the sex scenes, story is still better than almost everything else I have read on this site over many years...his relationship with Sally brought tears to my eyes. You have a couple of interesting glitches in Sections 1 and 2: he found her "A-spot" and after the first morning shower, he "shaved and cleaned his teeth" (part-time werewolf or was there a full moon that night?). Looking forward to being amazed by the rest of your story!

Rereading to see what I missed the first time, and I liked it then

I enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing it.

‘Sally, Sally, I love you like a daughter, much more than a daughter if I'm being honest. But it's Clive you really love, not me.‘

That was one patronising comment! U don’t sleep with someone u consider your daughter! How can this shit be in romance? She makes a cuck of Clive and has no regrets? Not a nice bunch of likeable people!

What a fucked up story! All about threesomes and it continues. Of course it can be further fucked up, when a couple of cute/gorgeous American girls join the menagerie! Sorry, not my cup of tea. Started out to be promising and then just deteriorated into facilitating threesomes! Talk about "Unusual Romance".!! Some may like it, be titillated by it but I must now look for something more rewarding.

Wow, love this storey so far, can’t wait to read more. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Interesting dilemma and looking forward to your solution. Gave it 4 stars only because it isn’t finished yet. I love the clarity and pace of your story and I have already added you to my Favorites.

And now for Part two.

Thanks

Fun read

Interesting story progression. Curious as to how it progresses. Not one for incestuous stories and I am not sure how I feel about the Sally/Mila dynamic. But, time will tell.

You really like polyamorous relationships don’t you. Plus you like the man to be a lot older than the women concerned and the women have to be bi’s.

A bit cliched to be honest. But it sells stories l suppose.

Every man’s dream is to be fucking two beautiful young women who will be fucking each other as well for his delight and edification.

A fantasy…..

Scores 4/5

wait... u have fucked so many twats since linda died..even someone whom u keep calling..u r like my daughter.. and he wonders if he is hurting Linds memory... seriously? What a sanctimonous bastard the doctor character is???

Too much candy for a nickel. Best I can read from this is 3 stars. Thanks

Really liked the start. The love was based on more than the hot sex. The end was nothing but sex pretending to be love. Will keep reading for the first half.

Same as the last comments.

A good start to a story that turns into anything.

- adultery, cheating and lying, incest...

It's a shame because it looks more like swinging or cuckolding than polyamory.

Amazed at the skills and stamina of the MC.

Polyamory seems more sophisticated and accepted than slutty lust and rutting incest. Highly intelligent professionals that happen to be beautiful and healthy fit. Does Robert Guccione's Penthouse seem classier than Playboy? Age and experience added with networked professionals counsel trauma patients. OK

Not sure the author is aware that the reload time of a late 50’s male is more than 5 minutes.

Naaaa…just too weird. I can’t find any way to become interested in some old fart banging some other guy’s wife…just because he’s “lonely.” I could only take a few paragraphs…not sure I’ll try another story by this writer…