All Comments on 'A Most Unwanted Present'

Is the reason not to read this.

Nice ending, no need for more words.

Such a nice O. Henry ending. 5 by 5

So she fucks around a bit, but what she gives him would be worth putting up with her occasional fuck with someone else.

Besides, he might be able to satisfy her if he fucked her enough.

It would be worth a try.

He should go get her and take care of her at least until the baby is born.

Thanks for the read.

I think he would consider himself lucky

So she fucks around a bit, but what she gives him would be worth putting up with her occasional fuck with someone else.

Besides, he might be able to satisfy her if he fucked her enough.

It would be worth a try.

He should go get her and take care of her at least until the baby is born.

Thanks for the read

I liked the story overall however i feel like you tried to hard to add detail. None the less having all that detail really added visualization for me and I appreciate it really good work on this I'll be looking for more submissions from you rather there in a contest or not.

just because he is leaving does not mean the husband is not off the hook. and it would seem he has a 1 in 3 chance of being a father.

Skillfully written, erotic, and I agree with Anonymous about the O. Henry ending.

i liked the twist in the story and how detailed it was considering that it's only 3 pages long. good plot. keep it up!

Thanks. tom anon

dumb cuck shit.

Another cracker. 5 stars

Wow, crazy, I loved it! Now what do you do? Throw her to the wolves or try and tame her, not likely. Great job, thanks for writing it's always appreciated as usual 😁😜👍

Loved the ending. Really made me smile!