All Comments on 'Southbound Ch. 17-18'

I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you.

Really enjoyed this great story

Great ending to a great story!

Boyd Percy

Thank you for a well thought out and very well written story.

In the end the what ifs will always chew on our confidence. He owes very much to his first wife and never would have reached his present situation in life without her illness and her decision on how to handle it.

Thanks for sharing.

But there are more saints in it than on the ceiling of The Sistine Chapel

Story development much as expected in a Coaster 2 plot - what raised this one is the sly end twist, Coaster 2's GPS story compass must have been glue sniffing (with good results!). Well done!

Ah, what a sad twist. Poor Carla, a martyr, and only her husband found out. I hope he will cherish his memories of Carla and never forget her sacrifice.

is that they are so far ahead of their loved ones. TK U MLJ LV NV

Should share this story of his wife's sacrifice..it would honor her memory

Perhaps he should of spoken to Ruth, she of all people deserved to hear about her own sister.

Yet another fantastic series, thank you

A story of joy and sadness, of the frailty of human life.

An excellent story, thank you for sharing it with us.

Your stories are always so good and I love the business detail you go into. I just wish they were longer. They are so interesting I hate it when they end lol.

Thanks for your hard work on these:)

Ed

good on ya coaster2

well balanced. very considerate, thoughtful.

enlightening

cheers

I really liked your story, Love hurts is just a painful memory , of all the heart aches people have to go through just to make it one day at a time.. Sadly I've made my share of mistakes, unfortunately I can't change any of them , I've found that time Isn't as much your friend as people believe it to be . some parts of this story actually brought tears to my eye's . I've lost friends from cancer and my wife of 23 years has had it twice now, the fear that brought out are as bad as the scares she carries on her body now. for the times I've thought of ending it all for the loss of hope I've felt means little in the face of her pain, and how she feels about her self even now after these many years … LOVE SOMETIMES HURTS..

With a depressing ending. Don't know if I could have kept that to myself.

What a wonderful tale of sacrifice, love, new love, old family and the creation of a new family. It was interesting to see how in the end it came full circle when Andy realizes in the end that Carla became in some ways a martyr by pushing Andy to find replacement wife rather than enduring the pain and suffering of watching his wife slowly die of cancer. The story that preceded of how Andy and Fiona meet, found love and building a new life, new family was wonderful. The budding love story of what happens between Phil and Tina would be an interesting tale to tell, that is if Coast2 would start writing again here on Literotica. Again Coaster2, well done on a wonderful story. 5 stars

Loved this story, happy and sad at the same time. Now reading Street Find another amazing story. you should publish these in a book.

Brilliant story.

I must have read 6 or 8 of you stories by now. I love them! Not many writers on this site develop characters, plot, with such diverse background as what I enjoy from you. Solid 5 stars.

All of his stories have been what is needed,