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demure101over 9 years agoLove this one -
Washed-up words will end up jingling in a young one's pockets!
Prolonged_Debut10almost 6 years agoThere is nothing here
There is no meter, there is no rhyme. The second stanza makes no sense at all and doesn't belong in this poem.
DawnJover 5 years agoAuthor@Prolonged-Debut10:
Ever heard of free verse? There is no meter, there is no rhyme. As to what belongs and doesn't in the poem, surely you cannot think to precrsibe that as well?
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