by seratfsg
exellent but a bit hurried n you had no patience to make her attractive after her boots came off - your Long Christmas was much, much better - after a while, you did not even care to make the heroine pretty, poor girl.
YUKIMI and I'm a man
As stated...some panels too dark. Otherwise good. Need a follow up story, and a little longer. Hot. Heck this could turn in to a whole series.
Not long enough, & some panels to dark to make out whats happening. But I really like your work. Thank You.
For me,I was unable to see much as the panels were all dark. Couldn't tell or
see any actions.
The Kzinti are a catlike alien race in Larry Niven's sci-fi work. I kept waiting for her to turn into a feline...
Your denotes possession. You're is a contraction for you are.
Thank you for your comment. Since this was NEVER INTENDED TO BE WRITTEN WORK but an ADULT COMIC. I will take your comment as a compliment.
Thank you
This is unbelievably bad stuff! It is not up to the standards of this site for even the crappiest of its written work.
excellent story board - one insignificant wish:(her right breast always looked flatter than the other) thicker breasts would have been killer - you already had her in superb lingerie and legwear - well done and keep going - she looked delicious - what a fuck she promises - well done - wish I had a doll like that - thank you.
yukimi