All Comments on '00' From The First Time'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
ONE IS AN IMPOSSIBLE NUMBER

to make or save a relationship. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Love's way!

The sweet acceptance and give and take of two people in love. Exquisite!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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So sentimental ~

Tho I'd probably want to switch the last two lines

Give it more appeal.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Another good piece

I'm enjoying your work,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

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