All Comments on '02' Love'

This is so sweet. I can feel your love ... pain.

Great imagery. Your work seems to twist and turn. When one least expects it, you throw in a whole new thought. I love that in poetry~!!

More Please~

Bursting with thoughts of love;

All you need to is fix a couple words from:

"Wishing you where here.

Dreaming you where near."

to:

"Wishing you were here.

Dreaming you were near."

Sweetly waiting ~ in repose. Securely confident in love. Beautiful and delicate poem. Lovely!

until you make it hyporcritical.. TK U MLJ LV NV