by svelte walker
I love the weird little word play that is going on in this poem. Perhaps I'll follow this poem's directions and just "sit, be quiet," and just follow the flow...wherever it goes. *grins*
Would have to say its certainly open to interpretation, but if thats the case. Then <grin>
I remain, Thesandman
I am seeing a bit of the oddly erotic here. Love the minimal images laced so nicely together. I am not sure if you shaped the poem with a purpose, but I liked the overall curved effect when considered with the words. Nicely done...
jim : )
. . .If you understand this playful poem. It is reminiscent of the work of Mary Palm.