All Comments on '1sayspine'

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wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. the 50% temperature rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone

TathagataTathagataover 16 years ago
i am not certain i can put you behind me at sunset

That's the only " weak spot" in what is an extraordinary well crafted,mind spinning poem.

The images are hypnotizing,disturbing and honest.

This is poetry trimmed of all bullshit and pretense.

I wish I saw more of it in this world, and I wish to God I could write it.

You have a singular talent my friend.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just to say..

..I really loved this. I'm not sophisticated so I'm not going to even try using big artsy words to describe how it moved me, it just did. Please keep up the wonderful work. Snow_White.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
IF ONE THINKS

what can he be. TK U MLJ LV NV

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