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good one - liked end - alot

Makes one think! (Devious you!)

Very sweet ~ put a big smile on my face!

~Honey

A good one

And like the number man said

Like the way the end

Plays out...

of male armour?

Clever comparison of the technique of war adapted to making love. Well-crafted with some very strong images.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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I liked the smily icon and the original idea. At the end though (probably it's the fault of my personal bio.) there were too many warfare and military allusions to make me smile.