All Comments on '4 a.m.'

Nocturnal activity in the Virtual World.

Caught it perfectly. The sence of pushing yourself to write just one more line.

OK another, then I'll stop.

Well, maybe ONE more before I go to bed.

Tap, tap, tap,

typing

at 4 a.m.

the work's never done;

whoever wants it to end?

Go on - keep on tap, tap, tapping.

I know the feeling of wanting to overpower sleep in favor of staying online.

I love the way your sentences are so strong, yet leave a wonder within th ewhole poem., It is almost an ominous feel, I just really enjoyed reading this :)

maria

I was just there the other night, or was it morning, who can tell and does it matter at 4 a.m.? Very nice.

Even the Sandman cannot overpower such determination. Nice work, Bel. ~Imp

one handed typer to another...bravo,handsome!

job well done.

*hugs*

v~

I've spent many an early morning, longing for the day that I could just roll over and fulfill the desires instead of forcing my eyes to remain open just to have a few more minutes... Took me back, and I absolutely know the feeling. Nice work, sweetie.

~lucky

I've been there and done that!! Good poem dollface!

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

...what it would read like without the forced, intial caps and broken into three verses...

...and maybe an ellispe, or two...

T'is a kone, n'est-ce pas, this sound of one hand?

Thanks, Belegon.