All Comments on '72705'

i feel your heavy heart, here.

i'm so sorry.

4degrees

A tough and anguished write...

Conveys a special sense of loss for which there are no words to aptly describe the devastation.

and such a heavy loss, my heart goes out to you.

Bloody hell! That was amazing.

I'm speechless. Realy, really good.

"breath" should be "breathe". There is no rhyme nor reason to this piece of work, just a bunch of garbled, unchecked sentences. I thought it was awful and if you care about writing poetry, you should read some poetry by other people who know how to write. Just for ideas,. tips, whatever. This is bad, it is hurried, rushed, and obviously unedited. Good luck in the future.

stirred many emotions.