All Comments on 'A bird with just one wing'

by raynecrow2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I liked parts of this poem,

however,

I think you can bring it together ..in a natural way much better with wisdom...bleu

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
interesting

I once had a mockingbird for a few years that had only one leg and one wing (~_~) thanks for the read

SealaceSealacealmost 18 years ago
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I like your style, your voice. Looking forward to more.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
fly.

Flying on just one wing ~ but does he have a prayer? Perhaps gliding is a viable option. A brief plain idea ~ ignites

the desire.

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