by Randi Grail
A relatively fresh voice presents
a complete and well structured/thought
poem of interesting imagery.
Some nice word play
with meaning, rhyme, and alliteration.
A good read.
Please let her keep her wits and her faith in self! Beautiful poem, Ms. Grail; I can feel the sweltering heat of the tent.
Especially the "god eat god" stanza. I've been searchin for the grail- hallelujah!
keep wring hun, and forget about numbers..every piece is so well written!
thanks for sharing!xo
Desperately joining the hordes in a feeding frenzy as they look to - heaven for help. Does salvation come from above or from within...
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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