All Comments on 'A Cherokee Rose: 'Dream Catch-her''

as I read your captivating tale of this Cherokee Rose, Art.

Actually, you had Me hooked with the French Rose series, so it was due to your wonderful talents that brought Me to your door begging {did I use that word?!?!?}to edit this series for you. I am honored - and it is I that now thanks YOU.<smile>

your captivating talent shows in these petals of verse..nice read/blue

your sense and ability to tell a story are so wonderful. I look forward to each installment of yoru series. Kepp them coming :)

i especially liked this part, made me smile real big--

when his spirit stick swelled.

never heard that before!!

ps, oh, Im part cherokee, bet you didnt know that :D so this one kinda feels special ~~ smiles and smiles

That is so pretty at the start!! Then it ends funny and HOT!! – You write so tricky and smart!! It is all so GOOD!!! Just like the others.

Thankyou ZenMAster ART!!!

It was a pleasure to read, and I can tell you put a lot of hard work into the poem. I believe the flow could've been a little better if the punctuation was worked on to be completely truthful.

Love these lines:

Paint brushes flower by the blue bonnets’ pose;

bare, in pure waters cleansing~ a Cherokee Rose

Thank you for sharing your talent!

blooming piece filled with both eroticism and humor. Very good!

You already know I love this one...since i got a sneak peak! LOL ;) don't stop with 3...who will she choose??? and what will her outcome be???

ENJOYED THE READ!VERY VISUAL!

THANKS!

cause i'm enjoying these as they come. but i have my favorite spot of all right here:

"This river isn’t DEEP?!?" the cowboy gurgled, coughed and spat

Dripping wet, he crawled up on the other bank and laughed

Giggling loud, this Cherokee rose; bare behind some driftwood

They both would stop their laughing {if they only somehow could }

******

superbly done!!!! am i laughing? you bet your ass i am....*LOL*

Your poem has been mentioned on the New Poems thread for Tuesday 12th April.

Clever rhymes, nice rhythm (that's a method of contraception BTW) and a pretty girl. What more could you ask for?

Thank you, Art, for your beautiful words. You honor me. *kisses*

It is obvious that this is the verse of an extraordinary talent. It is clear, concise, presenting a vivid portrait of a scene of eros and innocence combined - with a touch of good-natured humor for good measure. You've plenty to offer and I'll try not to read it all in one sitting.....

meter

rhythm

grammar

Who did you say was your Editor? Is the whole series like this?

Beautiful ... !

I'm part Cherokee as well, so I had to love this. Like good sex often is, this poem was as fun as it was sensuous.

i have a dream catcher, i'm not sure it's anything like this poem though. ;)

I love your rose, my grandmother was Cherokee and that was her name.

William

another may be up the. TK U MLJ LV NV