All Comments on 'A Cleansing'

this poem has been mentioned in the new poems review today. thanks for posting

purring kitty?

nicely done~

sort of tantalizing

mixed with endearment~

tantadearment~

There is more than one way to read this poem. However you see it it's a great work. Good job irish!

~an outward manifestation

of discontent and unease.

Pain personified.~

~Despair’s deluge

leads to transformation;

a cleansing of demons

false witnesses;~

I could go on

Maybe 1 verse too long...but I don't know what verse I'd get rid of.

You've really found your voice with this one

Thank you

: )

Fantastic imagery to be found here...

Overpowering sadness and grief ~ overcome almost unable to remember to take a breath. Tears like rain can make the flowers of forgiveness grow.

no blame nor shame. TK U MLJ LV NV