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- A dream
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I have a dream,
dressing me like a shadow does;
I have this dream
and it keeps me like a lace,
around my waist
and right inside my soul.
I want my dream,
but it won’t dress me anymore
leaving me there,
naked and with no words to say.
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jthserraalmost 20 years agoVery good...
initally I was going to recommend that you drop the word "does" at the end of your second line:
"dressing me like a shadow does;"
but reading on, I realize it works well as it is. An interesting dream.
jim : )
