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initally I was going to recommend that you drop the word "does" at the end of your second line:

"dressing me like a shadow does;"

but reading on, I realize it works well as it is. An interesting dream.

jim : )

Dreaming on a plane unique...

Dream takes flight ~ leaving a void unfillable.

CARRIED INTO ADULTHOOD. tk u mlj lv nv