All Comments on 'A Farewell to Reality'

I read this three times, enjoyed. I felt that you could have done without the is it real quote questions embedded in the poem, and gotten the point across. You have some excellent imagry here, the coyote part was great. I wonder what this would look like a little less narrative, leaner. Don't hate me, I only wonder because I care.

Gorgeous imagery sweeps before the reader’s eyes as image after image magnify this rendering. Several pertinent metaphors enhance this work as well. Top Notch!

O how ez to fracture the mind. TK U MLJ LV NV