All Comments on 'A Foray to Forget'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
not what I wanted to see

i.e not to my taste

just the 4th one down

this I like

While I found nothing but soured fantasies like cheese molded over

the rest, pretty good, first line attention grabber for sure

interesting structure

Q whether you need "sexual" in the last line, should be obvious by then

i fived

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
I assume you were describing a frown in the first line.

some good sonics

..

I drown myself in porn

I cleanse my pallet

cracker? ..no vote, but very interesting read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

We gotta do what we gotta do.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Forgettable Sex...

.... Hopefully only a once in a lifetime experience...Some nice metaphors in this one... QQ

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