All Comments on 'A Front'

You can make my heart weep without even trying. *kiss*

This poem is weighed down with adjectives. Cut out most of them, then rewrite with good nouns and verbs. No gerund verbs either if you can help it because they weaken poetry.

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Now this was very striking and I truly felt the pain of the poetry. Though no object centered this poem, It made a point of interest in the very personal tragedy! And you used a very bitter image with the pointed barb's! Made a very fine abstraction of introversion through suffering!

Now this was very striking and I truly felt the pain of the poetry. Though no object centered this poem, It made a point of interest in the very personal tragedy! And you used a very bitter image with the pointed barb's! Made a very fine abstraction of introversion through suffering!

J. Doe gave some sound advice

And better yet, it's free.

It's all about hiding your feelings. Beautiful thoughts on human development.

put our minds at shame. TK U MLJ LV NV