All Comments on 'A Moment'

It seems to have been written spontaneously and not given a great deal of thought--by that, I mean that I don't believe you took time to do much editing, and I think that makes this particular poem interesting to read it just as it is.

...it is an interresting piece, quite different from the poetry "norm" (if there is suck a thing). Looks like an ad-lib Spoken Word session transcribed. I for one like it a lot. A very refreshing read.

Those moments that happen

So quick you must grab them

Else they are gone forever.

A moment is like a vapor from a teakettle ~ seize it ~ embrace it ~ enjoy it.

interesting read when you consider that in the life of the Universe..our lives are but a fleeting 'moment'.