by UnderYourSpell
You made the form work for you and packed a lot of info about that buzzy little pest into your few, well-chosen words. Nice work, A. xo, S.
Hi! Your poem has been mentioned in today's New Poem Reviews: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.p hp?t=254157&page=129
reminds me of my cricket poem. You sure have blossomed in your writing, UYS and I have enjoyed watching you grow.