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i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating is given so that it does not affect future temp ratings - wildsweetone

This poem is MUCH HOTTER than any August summer (and I am at awe and dread the powerful heat of summer). Inadvertently (or not) I believe you might have released into the open some of many men most hidden fantasies. Oh lucky is the man who serves as your shelter.