All Comments on 'a poem for my lover...'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit with this piece with a cute little twist at the end. But I must confess that your lack of caps for the pronoun "I" is a bit distracting.

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
I liked it

It was erotic and real

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