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More like whimsically erotic

Where a man's lower brain

Becomes a universe in the making.

I am confused as to whether the universe is inside your or around you; however, I am pulled in by the idea of the likeness between orgasm and the big bang and the magnetism of the black hole in a universe sucking us in.

This poem does have a gravitational pull towards the climax. I love it so much I'll go back and read it again to try and get a clear fix on the outer limits of your universe.

Hugs

Kristin

... who came by on an impulse and was pleasantly surprised. I think it's been over a year since I was last here :)