All Comments on 'A Solitare Rose: ~ Clubs ~'

Different from your ZMP work

- and yet not

I feel that I'm in there

watching and being observed.

Mmmm, Hott lil poem here~!!

I can just see the Smokey haze

as it just settles in the air.

Smokey rings ... Reverberating ...

Especially love these lines:

Liquid courage for the tense and thirsty

waiting at the troft, her cup of liquid mercury.

~~~~~~~~~~~

Kinda makes me a lil Hottt

under tha collar ... Grrr

*Grins* More Please~!!

THIS IS CLEVER. A joy to read and very visual. You have

to read it several times to keep from getting your mind

tongue tied, but it is worth it. sand

very nice, you make it sound so seductive and enchanting!

it's always a good sign--LM