All Comments on 'A Solitare Rose: ~ Diamonds'

It's an amusing anecdote, but could use a little bit more work. The necessity of rhyme forced some awkward choices on several occasions, and the pivoting into the last stanza felt hurried. All things considered, though, not a bad effort.

It might not be zen

but as in the "club"

it's still vision

fresh and unclouded.

Let us see more.

This read like a mixture of your two trademarks - a cup of stanzas in fable form blended with just a pinch of zen. It made Me smile and feel good and that's all the taste of a poem I need to give it a 5. Thanks for the new recipe and the grin, Art!

Vixxx