by tungtied2u
The many ways to keep life from being mundane. Staying always on the alert for things not yet seen.
Why did I take this on a much more theological level? It is well done an any level, though.
I'd have to say this reminded me of the Wizard of Oz as well. The ending was great. Fab work :-)
for that wizard, that something, thing, being behind the glass, curtain, wisp of what ever you captured it :)
the last stanza reminded me a bit of the Wizard of Oz when the curtain is revealed to see the man behind the illusion.
Well done.
and this line is nicely dark:
while you watch amazed,
only to twist it round your throat
Loved the secrets here in the poem. The imagery is great. A lil humor here too. Good poem..*Smiles*