All Comments on 'a stone on your mountain'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Saw that title and had to read this;

Made me think of Stone Mountain and hiking to the top along its trail;

Not what I expected though not disappointed;

You continue to expand so very nicely.

TzaraTzaraover 17 years ago
I like this one, RF, a lot.

Simple, but not simplistic. Very nice. I think the punctuation needs some revision, though. Some commas seem to be missing, perhaps?

Nice read.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
ZMP

<grin... a zen mountain moment (~_~) I truely enjoyed this poem for its simplicity that casts a mountain of possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
waiting for that

bolt of light to pierce the core and yet , afraid to move into or back...just still...waiting in the rain...nice images..blue

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
First Rate!

Pick me up - skip me ~Rainy day plea ~ rain falling on a rock.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Beautiful..

There's nothing nicer than soft falling rain - pass the shower gel.

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