by RhymeFairy
Saw that title and had to read this;
Made me think of Stone Mountain and hiking to the top along its trail;
Not what I expected though not disappointed;
You continue to expand so very nicely.
Simple, but not simplistic. Very nice. I think the punctuation needs some revision, though. Some commas seem to be missing, perhaps?
Nice read.
<grin... a zen mountain moment (~_~) I truely enjoyed this poem for its simplicity that casts a mountain of possibilities.
bolt of light to pierce the core and yet , afraid to move into or back...just still...waiting in the rain...nice images..blue
There's nothing nicer than soft falling rain - pass the shower gel.