All Comments on 'A Yellow Rose: Hombre's Tango'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Toe Tappin Tango ~

watching this Hombre's energy surge in rhapsody

twisting and turning, extending an outward toe

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Cute and sexy. Just love the flow here Art. I did trip a lil in tha middle, but ya soon swept me up, back in tha fro ... Just a sexy lil write, toe-tappin fun ~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Keep 'em coming;

I sensed something too,

along what RF said,

that led me to wonder,

"What's happ'n here?"

And then you finished,

on a strong fast note....

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
action.

The Dance action heats up ~ the Yellow Rose and the Hombre share a dance.

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