All Comments on 'across the deserted continent'

by Senna Jawa

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wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 18 years ago
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i found this poem through the spinner - i'm glad i read and re-read your writing. it was worth my time. i liked the different font (it was unexpected) and i liked the images your well chosen words gave me. thank you.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A depressing feel of a long night at work.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lifelike

Through the word images one can almost see a deserted parking lot the guards watching TV or napping. Very true to life.

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