by Sabina_Tolchovsky
~Compositions of
gelatin silver emotion.
Washes,
to expose the sin.
I lay more than just my body
before your lens. ~
This was so fluid and seamless that it makes the beginning feel a little rough.
I love " gelatin silver emotion"
Thank you
Bit unsure about the stanza beginning 'Esthetic expositor' but the end from 'compositions' on is shimmery super.
After the first fourlines, you pulled this off quite well.
The first four lines, gave me a bad feeling of deja vu.
Very strong ending.