All Comments on 'Afraid of Life'

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful

tender, sweet.

Tha pain of being who you were at the time.

Great stuff and great subject.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sad

beauty. Great voice in this. Enjoyed, thank you

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
a story of many!

this is so sad..and i experienced the very same in college.

the taboo..i couldn't..i wouldn't..and for years i didn't..cept that lonely kiss of college days! 33 years b4 i found the depth eyes can take..the soft sensual touch of a woman..now i can ..i do..and i will..this was wonderful hun!

Toward A WordToward A Wordalmost 20 years ago
evocative sketch

the reader senses much more than is told - a beautiful depth for a such a concise work - well done

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
melancholy

beauty, just beautiful, wish I had something better to say, but I dont. I really enjoyed this poem, a lot..thank you :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The angst of teen love and the stumling mistakes that are made.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Once.

Haunted by a black haired girl with a guitar ~ regret for not following up on that first kiss.

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