All Comments on 'African Grey Parrot (a haiku)'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
lovely simple

visuals...bluerain

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
it leaves me...

to think as a writer would in the darkness. there is an advantage. nice piece...don

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Tight vision of a bird hidden by the night and its own feathers.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Undomesticated beauty

The image is indeed beautiful. Just as important though, thank you for raising the issue of capturing and domesticating those wonderful birds away from their habitat.

Still, I had a little problem with the picture of the parrot soaring into the night skies. I am NOT an expert on the Grey African Parrot, but it seems to me that as the parrot is vegetarian, it would be reluctant, like other day birds, to be active and exposed to carnivorous birds at night,. Am I wrong?

Do I have any problem with, say, a surrealist imagery? Of course not. I was just wondering if that was an intentional choice you made, or a detail you were not focusing on when you wrote it.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
beauty

I know not the way of the parrot ~ but these small lines are words of beauty. Lovely rendering!

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