All Comments on 'After the Rains'

by demure101

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

Delightful. I liked how you picked up the pace towards the end. I was expecting a surprise and got an ocean-ful.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
can a reader compare with

Amazon rainforests , Demure ?

DawnJDawnJabout 10 years ago
A dark magical quality...

...and whimsical, too! :)

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