by Tzara
I am moved...by words like "a", "an" and "the" and a few others. Very nice.
Deep insight into what the common man had to contend with on top of everything else in troubled times
beautiful and cutting in this reader's opinion. Poignant, concise - with no space wasted - and meaningful.
Love the piece's rhythm and the sharp, concise language. No word is wasted. Very poignant and touching, well-executed as always.
Vd
Not that I haven't always been awed by your poetry, but your recent pieces are incredible. Thank you!