by Tom Collins
Definetly a poem that is different from poems you have written before. Abstract, but i like it, it works!
j.b
I really enjoyed this poem -- the images and the symbolism, the idea of the fish being like life or something you want in life -- elusive, desirable, just out of reach. Excellent work!
Speaking as a woman that does not fish, I enjoyed this immensely! Love the word play.
Not big on fishing ~ so there, now you know my character flaw ~ but loved that ending ~ can just feel the frustration.
This is the first poem I have ever read about fishing. You've written it brilliantly. I loved it.