All Comments on 'alcoholism'

this was inspired from personal experiences?

"empty bottles thrown on the floor" is a good line, because it gives the reader an image. There are many poems about alcohol and personal tragedies, so it helps to make your poem stand out by adding personal details about places, scents, sounds, etc.

If you write another poem on this topic, or any topic, try to personalize it with details like the one above.

Thanks for sharing your poetry and experience.

Slowly piling on descriptions until the desolation of the addiction is clear.

Can I find an excuse to drink ~ let me count the many excuses.