All Comments on 'all alll alllll of Xanadu'

some good imagery and a nice overall metaphor. A tiny bit awkward in spots, but some real promise. Favorite line

"nurturing the tender crops he had sown"

I like it but I don't get the title--the alll alllll part.

*No longer using the thermometer.

Very picturesque and idealized imagery.

Gentle, delightful sex wrapped in a metaphor. The imagery was outstanding.